Anon05/08/26, 19:05No.4556133
I read the manga to see what the fuss about. I have to agree with anons here, the writing is utterly amateur, just imagine if in Adashima, very earlier on when Adachi questioned Shimamura if she wanted to enter her house because of the rain outside, Shimamura accepted her offer, nothing absurd so far, even though it would be incosistent with her character, but whatever it's still at the "Ignorable" range, yet, Adachi goes on and ask Shimamura to stay and sleep in her house, at the same bad, some may think "wow good the author cut the filler in their interactions and got to the best part already" but this would just show that the author writing is bad because he disregard everything in the story just to have the characters in a illogical situation right at the start, if the follow up is a good writen sex scene, this whole illogical situation could make it a good 18-rated doujinshi, but as a manga, where the follow up will for sure not be a good writen sex scene, it's bad, really bad.