Anon12/08/25, 02:34No.4487200
I like this one anon. The lighting is great and the composition is great too, I don't agree with the other guy saying you need to crop more, the whole goal is to see the books. To me there's a slight rotation of the main left line of books that I don't like. Also for the composition I would've stepped one or two steps to the right I think, this kind of angle is overdone, taking a pic of X subject through a frame Y (here the books pile) by just putting yourself perfectly in front of said subject will limit you. By taking a step to the right you would cut a bit of the guy and make it look like he's leaning on a pile of books, making the guy look more charismatic. Or maybe you can shoot in landscape mode, so the legs are cut and we see more books, but idk if there's more books on the right and left. Also the unlit cigarette is kinda strange, idk if it's your friend posing but cigarette + this light would create a cool smoke effect. The other pics are snapshits with no composition, you can do better