Anon12/01/25, 20:46No.4485802
Effortpostin from Oregon, 1/4?
Posing normies is a skill of it's own, you can get better with practice. A good rule of thumb for me is to always have the "throwaway" or lamest shots first, as most people tend to loosen up and get more comfortable as the session goes on.
For the first image, I would consider a small rotation which makes her appear to be less slouchy and makes the lines on the door a bit more pleasing.
There's too much empty space on the left and bottom sides, so crop in a bit. If you want to start actually editing, the pipe and graffiti on the side are distracting elements, and if something doesn't add to the frame, leave it out. Now you have an imaged focused on the girl, balanced with the heart.
Going extra, I would have her back leg be a bit more vertical to align more with the flow of lines on the wall. Also might change the pose for her front arm, quite sure what, but I feel like it could be placed better.