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Anonymous03/15/26, 03:07No.43105977FiMFiction Thread: Now with 44% more hyper autistic Midnight Sparkle clones that Applejack keeps mol
Come one and all to the meta-writefag and help raise the quality of MLP fanfiction! Featuring: Them old timey torpedo titties!
ITT: The heights of Dr. Seuss, keeping their horrific and degenerate nature under the janny's radar, Apple parents snuff fic, irony means "thing I dislike", the inherently cucked medium of horseprose, why am I bothering to defend fanfiction, saying a puppy isn't cute because you vomited all over it, fucking Scootaloo's abusive mom, being overthrown as a form of retirement, anyone who dislikes my work simply read it wrong, Ponyville's officially appointed rapist would have managed at least 30 rapes, that old Harry Potter spy fic my mom made me read, Chrysalis' incest baby fic was less infuriating, SubscribeStar killing Fimfiction for good, but which is based and which is cringe?, you're totally right—and the fact that you noticed shows just how much of a literary mastermind you are, denying the right to post on Fimfic to third-worlder ESLs, and writing for drooling mongoloids!
>/fimfic/ Secret Book Club
The one hundred and sixty-ninth book is Twilight Sparkle and the Cake Thief!
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/301618/twilight-sparkle-and-the-cake-thief
If (You) want to participate, finish the story by Sunday, March 15th.
>Recommended stories:
Tired of adventures that meander for a million words? Fed up with super special OCs? Well, we've compiled the best of the worst in order to bring you our absolute average!
New Starter Kit - http://mlpficreviews.org.uk/starter/
Old Starter Kit - http://i.imgur.com/vuTA7EN.png
>Common fic abbreviations used by the thread:
https://ponepaste.org/7317
>A list of reviews made by the Anons in this thread:
http://www.mlpficreviews.org.uk
Use the commands ">review <story link>" and ">discuss <story link>" to add reviews to a story.
Userscript for extra features: https://ponepaste.org/8619
>An in-depth writing guide for beginners:
https://eznguide.neocities.org/
>Additional material for authors:
Rhorse's Horse Behavioral Notes - https://ponepaste.org/932
Politics and the English Language - https://www.orwell.ru/library/essays/politics/english/e_polit/
Vhatug's tips for anatomically correct clop - https://poneb.in/g4VpEg4f
Purdue Online Writing resources: https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/index.html and https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/subject_specific_writing/creative_writing/writers/index.html
>Can you pre-read my story?
Post it on Google Docs or HackMD with comments enabled and give us a link.
>Various reviews and riffs:
Fillyanon's Bookshelf - https://ponepaste.org/5555
Notkickass222urmom's Reviews - https://pastebin.com/u/notkickass222urmom
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Appleanon reads fics - https://poneb.in/wmGX7FPm
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Previous Thread: >>43088168 [/mlp/thread/43088168#p43088168]
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Anon03/15/26, 03:07No.43105980
With all that's going on, I feel like we're rapidly approaching the death of the site.
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Anon03/15/26, 03:08No.43105983
2nd for best 2uo!
Enjoy this conveniently packaged Tuna: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/301618/twilight-sparkle-and-the-cake-thief
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Anon03/15/26, 03:09No.43105992
Oops, I didn't catch that it cut off "molesting"
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Anon03/15/26, 03:10No.43105993
Should've updated the club with the Archetypist.
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Anon03/15/26, 03:31No.43106042
Reminder: Ai is synonymous with low quality. If you use Aislop in any form then don't expect it to be read
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Anon03/15/26, 03:40No.43106060
Anypony willing to spoonfeed a newtard on how the book club works? Raributt as payment.
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Anon03/15/26, 03:54No.43106077
When the majority of the past thread references in the OP are of your own posts, does that mean you're the funniest guy in the fimfic thread?
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Anon03/15/26, 04:00No.43106084
Any fics that run with the old movie concept of Celestia and Luna having a long lost brother?
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Anon03/15/26, 06:00No.43106212
>Applejack molesting autistic fillies
It's hilarious that people are still talking about this. It's a big subject, popular subject. And who wouldn't, right? Who wouldn't find Applejack narrowly escaping sexually charged situations with a mentally disabled little Twilight clone appealing? I know I would. It's a very compelling premise. I wouldn't blame Applejack for what she would do or not do, by the way, because everypony gets into situations like that sometimes.
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Anon03/15/26, 06:11No.43106224
Fics where Ponyville's only Foal Services worker has their work cut out for them and then some?
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Anon03/15/26, 13:06No.43106536
tl;dr
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Anon03/15/26, 15:00No.43106755
Secretly starting a new fic, in
>/FSBC/is almost completely tonally disjointed from the first. I actually liked it much more (I'll get to that in a moment), but the first fic ends the moment Twilight sets her trap, and what follows effectively reads like a different story. The first is formally about the SoL'y [Mystery], but really it's about younger pre-S1 Twi interacting with ponies and Twilighting in a low-stakes, enjoyable story; it is fluff, but a decent fluff. The second part, however, takes an IMMEDIATE dive into the tragic part of the story of the Two Sisters, and the narration matches it with a wistful, mysterious tone of nostalgia. Luna is the main character, Twilight secondary (with almost none of her fun part 1 charm), and everypony else disappears from the fic without as much as saying goodbye. The second part of the fic has none of the lightness, but it exchanges that for such a lovely sense of mystery and longing. Do they fit in the same story? No, not particularly. But it made for an unusual experience and revived the fic for me; at the time, I was starting to get bored with it. Why?Because the second thing I must bring up is that the fic cheats! Doing a pre-canon non-AU fic imposes certain restrictions on you, namely how that story fits with canon and how you can go about mentioning relevant information that the characters do not know at this point. Yet this fic decided to completely toss that idea to the trash, milking FiM's best story for all its worth and then some—only to cope itself back into canon with what is basically a memory wipe. Okay, the author is clearly at least somewhat capable, so he tried to justify himself and escape the pointlessness and fakeness of the 'conflict' with, "But some part remains, and that's how we got to EP1!" It is still pretty fundamentally lazy and must be called out. He tries to eat his cake and have it too, ha ha. It was really annoying when he held onto it like a crutch, constantly prodding the reader with "Look, it's LUNA!11!!".And then you have the epilogue. I must stress that I really liked the Luna part of the story, despite my criticism of the creative process that led there. What can I say? People can be divided into two groups: those who still gush over the C&L story in 2k12+14, and those who have bad taste. The atmosphere in the moonlit encounter was amazing. The Tuna epilogue, then, exists to both make that part more valuable in the context of the show and to basically justify the fic's existence. It succeeds on both fronts, imo. This is a really good ending. Also, it helps that the author is a pretty capable writer, efficiently conveying the moods* and subtleties of each scene.
*Younger Twi using the subjunctive was cute. In general, the characterizations and character voices come through very strongly here for Twi, Spike, Luna, and Celestia. Shiny, too!
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Anon03/15/26, 21:11No.43107550
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Anon03/16/26, 00:07No.43107926
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Anon03/16/26, 01:11No.43108037
Fics with Looney Tunes slapstick? Nonphysical humor does not appeal to me at all.
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Anon03/16/26, 02:14No.43108183
Just ban all NSFW, easy.
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Anon03/16/26, 06:13No.43108473
Fics about tender foal-making sex between loving pony couples?
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Anon03/16/26, 13:53No.43108938
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Anon03/16/26, 16:13No.43109104
How's that writing going?
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Anon03/16/26, 18:50No.43109369
Based eldorado keeping the brown aihorde at bay. Yes you are being gatekept, no one wants your slop. Cry about it
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Anon03/16/26, 19:29No.43109448
I have had an idea for a fic to write for a long time and I want to know what you people think about it. It would be a sorta short fic that I could theoretically extend into a long fic with a plot extending from the short fic but I don’t have the time for that anymore. This is just a general outline.>its a normal day for celestia until a series of events gradually build in her a sense that she is forgetting something. Which noticeably nags at her and distracts her from her work until one final event (probably twilight related) jogs her memory of what it is. Something that had happened a very long time ago that she had forgotten. And she decides it’s important enough that she aught to relay to the major plot relevant ponies.
>there was a period a long time ago where equestria was facing a litany of problems for reasons nopony truly understood, and was on the brink of total collapse. As a result the princess has fallen into a pit of despair and hopeless. Consumed with the belief that she had failed her little ponies. And while it was written in the history books that she eventually determined how to resolve these issues and save her little ponies herself, that’s not what actually happened.
>what really happened, she says, is that at her darkest moment, some… thing, appeared before her.
>the thing told her of strange things. Of an ancient and powerful race of beings, who achieved accomplishments beyond anything she could have imagined, only to eventually be destroyed by the very means which brought them their success.
>the thing told her that it could teach her the secrets of these ancients, of the means by which they achieved their greatness. Means by which she could solve the problems of her own time and place, and elevate her own people to the same level.
>the thing told her that it would be willing to teach these things to her without any form of payment, but that it also could not tell her how or why those ancients truly fell directly, and that it would still come with a cost. That being that she would have to do what they could not, and prevent what caused the collapse of those ancients from happening to her own society. In addition, that by virtue of the nature of the knowledge that it would bestow on her, her state of consciousness would be altered in a manner that would enable her to utilize it, but also dispose her to losing awareness of it origins, and what consequences it could result in.
>celestia, after some deliberation, asks the thing to teach her how to same her little ponies.
>thus emerged a relationship between the things and the princess. The thing teaching her of those ancient creatures, and her saving her people.
>however she gradually began to forget that this knowledge was not coming from herself. And although she initially tried to fight back, eventually she was taken over by this belief, and forgot about the thing and the deal she made with it.
>until a long time later, something reminded her.
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Anon03/16/26, 21:59No.43109768
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Anon03/17/26, 00:57No.43110064
You guys know there's a length of fic between a oneshot and a long fic, right
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Anon03/17/26, 13:59No.43110948
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Anon03/17/26, 14:13No.43110960
Only 3 upvotes needed to make it to the box.
What's your excuse?
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Anon03/17/26, 17:36No.43111218
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Anon03/17/26, 20:55No.43111605
4 month break and only two fics on my list updated.
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Anon03/17/26, 23:52No.43112090
I have recently waisted hours of my life doing something in an inefficient manner that produced an unsatisfactory result when a better way was right in front of my face the entire time and I didn’t think to try it because of my autistic tunnel vision.Fics to soothe the pain?
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Anon03/18/26, 02:52No.43112498
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Anon03/18/26, 10:11No.43112960
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Anon03/18/26, 17:47No.43113659
Any good fics with this sort of vibe?
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Anon03/18/26, 20:12No.43113963
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Anon03/18/26, 21:19No.43114102
oh yay my favorite fic updated
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Anon03/19/26, 02:12No.43114707
"Celestia Becomes A Total Milf And It's Everyone Else's Problem"but it's not HiE slop.
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Anon03/19/26, 04:24No.43114922
>Pre-Unification fic where each of the tribes speaks a different classical language
>Pegasi speak Latin
>Unicorns speak Greek
>Earth ponies speak Old English
Haven't thought of a plot yet.
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Anon03/19/26, 16:36No.43115751
I thought you were gone for good...
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Anon03/19/26, 16:56No.43115797
I can't believe this ended.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/98568/mlp-time-loops
Really takes me back to '13.
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Anon03/19/26, 18:43No.43116025
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Anon03/19/26, 21:43No.43116445
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Anon03/20/26, 01:38No.43116828
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Anon03/20/26, 06:11No.43117203
>do a "site:fimfiction.net" search on Google using an exact copypaste from a fic
>0 results
>do the same search on Yandex
>6 results, but not the fic it was copypasted from
>do it on Yahoo
>3 results, but none of them are from the Yandex search and the original copypaste fic still isn't included
I'm going to have to download the Fimfarchive and manually index it if I want accurate results, aren't I?
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Anon03/20/26, 09:33No.43117421
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Anon03/21/26, 00:01No.43118858
Huh, that's a first.
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Anon03/21/26, 02:20No.43119172
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Anon03/21/26, 15:19No.43120257
I could hear you beta males talking about my pegging fetish
You know getting pegged by your alpha is one of the most high test things you can do
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Anon03/21/26, 18:35No.43120721
Fic where Twilight invents Equestria's first working sex toys and destroys civilization
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Anon03/22/26, 04:05No.43121757
are there any good HiE stories about a human female in pony land?
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Anon03/22/26, 13:44No.43122352
fics where rainbow dash tries to use water to put out a grease fire?
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Anon03/22/26, 15:23No.43122565
Picturing that. (But not in just your dreams),
>/FSBC/Right off the bat, I'll say I really liked the intro. It's got a good vibe to it, I think. The whole story is really smooth to read (says a lot considering I did the req. reading at 3am today).I think the story is fascinating. 'Unbinding dreams' is super interesting to think about, and honestly something I'd like to see explored in another fic. With that said, because of how things're going so far in the story, I'd say it's missing a tag; [Horror].Everyone being so... blase about actual, real bodily changes occurring after they dream rubs me wrong. Why is Twilight the only one who takes umbrage with this? For instance- Mrs. Cake and her sudden pregnancy. Cool, her and Carrot wanted another foal. Cool, she's happy she's pregnant. But /why/ are they so... level? about this occurring? Why're Twilight/Starlight having to go around and discover/ask about major occurrences like this rather than someone at least coming to the castle and going 'uh hey princess I just recovered from my severe baldness after waking up this morning. which is great and all but will this last forever? is this a gift from somepony?'Like, Twilight's constant worry is just repeatedly shaken down by ponies going 'mmm, but if they're happy about it, everything's chill, yeah?' which is just... weird. It doesn't matter if it's all gravy because it's still too much damn gravy out of nowhere. I have read this before, but the details have gotten hazy enough that I can't recall if the topic of some deeper blanket mental changes gets brought up, but yeah. I don't like the way Twilight's concern is handled.I'll get back to that because frankly it's my biggest complaint, but I suppose I gotta mention how much I liked Luna's scene in the library when she drops by looking for Discord. I enjoy how CiG handles integrating depictions of magic into the story, overall. It really plays into the fantastical nature of the world and I dig it.Did anyone else clock how AJ seems to come across as oddly tribalist against unicorns, specifically? The cedar thing early on, and then her scene when talking with Twi about Trixie. Like, I can see that's it's just once again a moment of trying to convey how Twilight's flipping out about something everyone else is okay with, but it just reads with such underlying distaste from AJ and it's weird. The tribalism in general between her and Twi ('you don't know what you're missing') is just strange. And once again, why is AJ of all ponies so cool with a situation brought about by capital D-Dickhead Discord?Fluttershy feels strange in this. Not... bad? I guess? But just a bit too far removed from her typical self. I don't like the bit about reformation, and in general her scene in chapter 2 (and honestly the rest of the fic) is a good reminder of CiG's quirk; mentioning sex. I may be a bit prudish but it's always noticeable, with him.
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Anon03/22/26, 15:52No.43122652
First time participating in any sort of bookclub, so forgive my retardation.Firstly, it's decently written. Minor grammatical errors. Had to stop myself from finishing it in a single sitting, that's how well the whole thing flows. That's about the best thing I can say about this fic, the actual plot and characters leave something to be desired. He's got this dramatic tension throughout the whole thing that's more at place in a horror fic and I honestly didn't even know it wasn't tagged as such until it was pointed out by the Cheeriflag.I enjoyed Flutters' scenes, regardless of if they're OOC or not. Applejack's interactions left a bad taste in my mouth, nothing to look forward to when she comes up. Trixie was good too, Glimmer needs to shut up, though those are mainly just my own biases. Luna's scenes were...fine. They're not bad, but you can tell the author was a little less critical with editing those parts. I assert that he waifus Luna, with Fluttershy or Twilight as a close second.By the end of Chapter 10, I get the impression that this is going to culminate in some oh-so-deep sequence about how Twilight never ASKED to be made an alicorn princess, and how she's been focused on Celestia so thoroughly her whole life that she never stood up for what she actually wanted, if she even knows what that is.I think the author is a decent writer, even just from this brief look at his work, but I think he thinks his scenarios are more impactful than they really are.I'll be attaching my notes for each chapter because I think they give a more accurate idea of my thoughts on the fic as it progresses. I'm curious to see how this all plays out, especially the Fluttershy and Rarity sideplots.
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Anon03/22/26, 16:29No.43122735
I should reread The Archetypist just to see if the tarot motif is really there, but then I'd be rereading The Archetypist and I could be doing something else instead.
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Anon03/22/26, 21:53No.43123478
Any fics written like religious parables in the vein of K6BD's liturgy or the 36 Lessons of Vivec?
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Anon03/22/26, 22:35No.43123560
Hi everyone! (you) are hereby invited to my marecon panel, Russian Fanfiction Overview 2, where I will do recaps of certain pony fics from the russian-language side of the fandom. What to expect - sad fics, historical fics, good fics and trashy fics I've got some prime trashfic material in store, all accompanied by the fruits of a thousand hours spent in MS Paint! It will be similar to the first part I hosted last year, so if you've seen that one you know what to expect.The panel will be held on March 29th (Sunday). You can check the exact time in your local time zone on the marecon website.
https://www.marecon.live/schedule/sundayIf you have any questions, I'll be happy to answer.
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Anon03/23/26, 04:24No.43124383
>get an idea
>write an outline
>never progress any further
My life
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Anon03/23/26, 06:11No.43124520
>spin off the Daring Do fetish scenes into their own story
>break your daily record and drop in 5.2k
This might be done in a week if this pace keeps up. On the downside, it's starting to distress me a little how horny it's making me. None of my previous fetish writing has hit this hard before.
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Anon03/23/26, 12:40No.43124966
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Anon03/23/26, 14:58No.43125194
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Anon03/23/26, 18:51No.43125628
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Anon03/23/26, 19:22No.43125688
>new twipie fic
>It's AI generated
God dammit.
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Anon03/23/26, 21:27No.43125980
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Anon03/23/26, 23:41No.43126258
Any good body swap fanfics?
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Anon03/24/26, 00:04No.43126308
Any good?
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Anon03/24/26, 02:30No.43126613
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Anon03/24/26, 04:22No.43126815
Wrote a lot of lesbians today
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Anon03/24/26, 06:42No.43126996
What's that one tragedy/romance/smut fic where rainbow dash and rarity hook up?
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Anon03/24/26, 09:42No.43127263
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Anon03/24/26, 16:12No.43127899
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Anon03/24/26, 17:42No.43128192
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Anon03/24/26, 17:44No.43128197
Any good human turned pony fanfics?
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Anon03/24/26, 19:10No.43128496
Oh, go figure.
We turned 12 yesterday.
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/16923879/
Congrats, /fimfic/
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Anon03/24/26, 19:48No.43128552
Assuming this place still exists in 12 years. God knows what might happen to hiro or what he might do with this place.
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Anon03/24/26, 20:06No.43128586
>Assuming this place still exists in 12 years. God knows what might happen to hiro or what he might do with this place.
You're right. Your bitchass might be gone.
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Anon03/24/26, 20:10No.43128591
sorry OP meant to respond to (the forty-three million one-hundred-and-twenty-eight thousand-and-five-hundred and fifty-second post on /nu-/mlp//):
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Anon03/24/26, 22:38No.43128843
>a bunch of people are starting to writing mud puddle fics to parody the one deviantart guy
Lmao
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Anon03/24/26, 23:50No.43128945
I don't want to fuck the horses.
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Anon03/25/26, 05:26No.43129369
Yay, next milestone reached.
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Anon03/25/26, 10:52No.43129736
