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Anonymous10/24/26, 03:22No.8067305undertale fanart au
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITIZISIM ONLY, my drawing tell me how can i improve it what should i add or change, thank you
this is my fanart from my au of undertale SANS IS THE LAW where sans dominates all the underground and is the LAW
what should i draw next?
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Anon10/24/26, 03:31No.8067309
it looks great but the concept is just so gay
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Anon10/24/26, 03:41No.8067313
Never played Undertale, but I'm familiar with the character and I get the concept that you're making with him. Unless you're going something similar to Ainz Ooal Gown - I'd focus on something like that.Personally if I were to draw this, I would have drawn Sans simplified as he is in game, and the other characters more complex. His attacks are based on skulls and bones... I would have added that instead of the dead/decapitated characters.
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Anon10/24/26, 03:47No.8067317
her head and her tits are too small
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Anon10/24/26, 05:33No.8067351
Love the hatching and way you drew Sans. I think most improvements can be done to the composition and the other characters.
>Sans should be right in the middle of the image instead of off to the right, he is the focus
>Toriel should be a bit more centered below him too
>undyne should be closer and not in the background, either way don't have her ass covered by one of the heads, defeats the point of having her facing away like that to show her ass if it's going to get covered like that anyway
>instead, have her directly interacting with Sans by standing guard right next to him (instead of in the back) or maybe laying over his knees fawning over him. Use your imagination
>Toriel is too small compared to sans overall, her head is also too small proportionally
>consider adding more domineering details such as him holding chains to one or both of their collars to reinforce the DOMIMATION idea. Could also have him putting his right foot on toriel since he has it raised up anyway
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Anon10/25/26, 01:05No.8067785
why would you draw undyne with her ass out if you're going to hide most of it
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Anon10/25/26, 09:22No.8067952
